Orion and Joc

Well, lets get right into this.

Vision: The picture is exquisite, my eyes were instantly drawn to the female's face, it is quite well drawn and shaded and the pink tint to her nose is very pretty. However, the lines and shading in other area's seem sloppy and are a bit confusing. Be sure to know where your light source is and to be clean when it comes to lines. Also, work at drawing fingers, they seem a bit amorphous. Plus, the profile view of the males face makes it appear as if he has no lips or forehead. Be sure to work at these things.

All and all its very lovely but a little messy and unclear.

Originality: Lots of pictures show people hugging but your approach showed one of clear affection and almost friendship. It's very comforting.

Technique: You have an interesting style, but an unclear technique when it comes to hair and certain body parts. Particularly the male's hair seems to be floating, be sure to make it fall against his shoulders.

Impact: This image gives me a somewhat warm and (while cheesy sounding) happy feeling. You approached it quite well and it was clear what you had in mind. Very soothing.

All and all: Work on the way you make hair fall, make lines a bit more clean, be sure to give fingers structure, keep a potential light source in mind, and nice job. C:

If any of this was offensive to you, I apologize, it was only intended to be helpful. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>